Great writing. enjoyed reading it. At the first glance

"ironing his flesh" didn't register in me. When i stared at it it just dawned on me...hahaha

"flinging a poise" was vivid. I wish bing had kept the poem. Looks like bing didn't write any poem to ms Chen before they left the wutong tree. I would have let ms Chen to 猜個燈謎 just to make her relax a little：


hairy around the hole
hidden under a cover
A little bird slips in
As if to see its lover

ha