忍不住，改了幾筆，使譯文在形式上更接近原文，使月亮......

忍不住，改了幾筆，使譯文在形式上更接近原文，使月亮從左上角被一溜煙地帶到右下角消失了

By Li Shen
       
The pale moon
Mirrored in a pond
Was so tranquil that even
The visiting wind kept quiety
And was soon carried away by a bird
 
 
秋月

月兒蒼白
對鏡於池塘
一切如此靜謐
來訪的風兒也不響
俄頃，一隻飛鳥駝走了月亮