請英文高手幫我改改完美一下,謝謝。

來源: 2013-07-16 09:26:34 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀:
A cool summer night in London, I woke up and wrote to you
I could walk on the street naked thinking of you wanting me...
You say, don't be too naked it's cold there
Then I saw a fox crossing the street, disappeared
Into woods in the central London
I wonder if it is just lust like the summer haze

You are fading away, but still
I see you sitting on a bench at Parnassus
I hear you talking inside Moffitt
I feel you touching my perfect body with your mind
But I've never dreamed of you
I just wake up and write to you