我來貢獻一下吧。僅供參考

I’ve been reading a book, Three Cups of Tea, recently.【If I were you, I would remove this sentence and start the review with "Three Cups of Tea" tells a real story...】 This book states-->tells （state在這裏用的不對，我覺得）a real story of an American man, Greg Mortenson, who helped build【ing加上比較好,個人感覺哈，不加ing覺得是不定式，有將來時的感覺】 schools for children in Pakistan. I bought this book [A] few months ago. Even though it is said 【one should】 never judge a book by its cover, I was actually captivated by the cover of this book, Three Cups of Tea. The cover shows a picture of three Pakistan[ian] girls who are wearing traditional Pakistan【ian】 cloth【do you mean clothes? or the veil on the face?] concentrate on books;? and there are words state “Three Cups of Tea: one man’s mission to promote peace…one school at a time”.(I would just move this to the fourth line where the title appears without "and there are words state") I quickly read over the reviews of this book on the first page, and then decided to purchase it.