我還感覺到

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你有的地方斷句多（意群分得太多），這樣對句子的整體性有破壞作用。例如第一句，你分了三個片斷（segment),如果連成一起，把這個句子讀成一起，應該顯得更順暢；尤其是下麵跟著有好多句子的時候。

There was music | from my neighbor’s house | through the summer nights.
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There was music from my neighbor’s house through the summer nights.