但尾聯一“頓挫”，就有點“掉鏈子”的感覺。改為“人生自古誰無死，留取丹心寓酒杯”如何，哈哈。

來源: 唐宋韻於 2024-01-21 12:04:16 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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