《Do You Remember》(英文)

我今天嚐試做了英文版的《記得嗎》調試了幾版Suno prompts和歌詞tags。做出了一版符合我審美並有感染力的搖滾。它的結構要比原中文版更舒展、更豐富些畢竟語言特點不同。中文是極度濃縮的語言,“直接給”就非常有力量了。但英文版這樣做會覺得比較跳躍,情緒沒到撐不起副歌。真是非常有意思的發現呢!
Do You Remember
Lyrics: Aubrey Morrow (暮子默)
Music/Vocals: Suno
Raindrops still hang on the window glass,
Dead leaves floating where the puddles amass.
Half a song lies still, untouched and undone,
Time won’t wait, and the story has just begun.
Every step feels heavy, worn-out and slow,
Turn around—there’s nowhere left to go.
A heart gone gray, tears inked in black,
It tastes like sorrow, but nothing comes back.
Do you remember that boy with a guitar in hand?
Singing like the world would understand.
His smile lit up the coldest air
Do you remember? He was always there.
Someone’s gone too far, no chance to say goodbye,
Someone’s stuck in place, still learning how to try.
The wind keeps howling, the nights grow long,
We keep on walking, pretending we’re strong.
If you’re tired, just lay your head and sleep,
The moon will guard your quiet dreams so deep.
If you break, then let the silence fall
Even broken hearts still hear the call.
Do you remember that boy with a fire inside?
Singing through the dark, with nowhere to hide.
He played like hope was in his hands
Do you remember? Can you still understand?
And when the sun climbs through the morning haze,
It’ll bring a golden dream to light your face.
You’ll hear that melody again, so true
A quiet song... and he’ll be there with you.
謝謝你喜歡:-) Have a great day!
喜歡這個歌曲的節奏和樂器選擇,以及歌手的唱腔。