狄金森(Dickinson)《無法察覺地,猶如愁緒》(Fr935)
文章來源: 舒嘯2019-09-06 02:20:34

(Emily Dickinson,1830 – 1886)

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譯記:充滿活力的夏日,不可避免地要逝去。而幾絲惆悵、釋然、還有超越的希望,難以察覺,無從衡量,卻被狄金森的詩行捕捉到了。

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“無法察覺地,猶如愁緒”

(美)狄金森
舒嘯 譯

 

無法察覺地,猶如愁緒

夏日已然逝去

絲毫無法察覺,簡直

不像是背信棄義  

 

這是淨化出的靜寂

暮色已經開始了許久

或許是自然與她自己

度過了幽居的午後 -- 

 

黃昏提前臨蒞  

晨光已形如陌路  

禮貌而又煩擾的風儀

就像賓客即將離去

 

就這樣,沒有羽翼

或是龍骨支撐的船體

我們的夏日輕輕地逃逸

進入美麗的境地

 

(J1540 / Fr935)

 

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Dickinson 原詩:

 

“As imperceptibly as Grief”

 

As imperceptibly as Grief

The Summer lapsed away —

Too imperceptible, at last

To seem like Perfidy —

 

A Quietness distilled

As Twilight long begun

Or Nature spending with herself

Sequestered Afternoon —

 

The Dusk drew earlier in —

The Morning foreign shone —

A courteous, yet harrowing Grace

As Guest that would be gone —

 

And thus without a Wing

Or service of a Keel

Our Summer made her light escape

Into the Beautiful

 

(J1540 / Fr935)

 

 

 

另:該詩有五個版本。第一個版本有8節,如下:

 

As imperceptibly as Grief

The Summer lapsed away -

Too imperceptible at last

To feel like Perfidy -

 

A Quietness distilled -

As Twilight long begun -

Or Nature - spending with Herself

Sequestered Afternoon -

 

Sobriety inhered

Though gaudy influence

The Maple lent unto the Road

And graphic Consequence

 

Invested sombre place -

As suddenly be worn

By sober Individual

A Homogeneous Gown.

 

Departed was the Bird -

And scarcely had the Hill -

A flower to help His straightened face

In stress of Burial -

 

The Winds came closer up -

The Cricket spoke so clear

Presumption was - His Ancestors

Inherited the Floor -

 

The Dusk drew earlier in -

The Morning foreign shone -

The courteous, but harrowing Grace

Of Guest who would be gone -

 

And thus, without a Wing

Or service of a Keel -

Our Summer made Her light Escape

Unto the Beautiful -

 
 

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