文/子同
夢裏是磐石 醒來是沙磧
夢裏是爐火 醒來是灰燼
夢裏是肌膚 醒來是泥土
夢裏是歌聲 醒了是石碑
夢醒時分
子同 (2015-09-11 10:02:51) 評論 (2)
文/子同
夢裏是磐石 醒來是沙磧
夢裏是爐火 醒來是灰燼
夢裏是肌膚 醒來是泥土
夢裏是歌聲 醒了是石碑
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夢醒時分
子同 發表評論於
回複 '雙兒02155' 的評論 : It's, indeed, a beautiful translation! Thank you very much for these elegant and delightful phrases! Especially, I like the rhyme that you introduced, which has been compromised in my original version.
雙兒02155 發表評論於
Dream and Awake
I arise from my dreams
Rock has turned into sand moraine
I arise from my dreams
Fire has burned down with only ashes remain
I arise from my dreams
Smooth flesh has turned into muddy stains
I arise from my dreams
Happy songs left nothing but tombstone ingrain
O I dream the dreams filled with bright
But I arise from my dreams to sleepless night!
注：我是你同學的同學，上述譯文是她讓我瞎湊出來的.如果譯得不好敬請斧正（smile).也歡迎你來訪問我的博客.
I arise from my dreams
Rock has turned into sand moraine
I arise from my dreams
Fire has burned down with only ashes remain
I arise from my dreams
Smooth flesh has turned into muddy stains
I arise from my dreams
Happy songs left nothing but tombstone ingrain
O I dream the dreams filled with bright
But I arise from my dreams to sleepless night!
注：我是你同學的同學，上述譯文是她讓我瞎湊出來的.如果譯得不好敬請斧正（smile).也歡迎你來訪問我的博客.
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