多線敘事沒有問題，問題在於他晃來晃去太過頻繁，把完整的故事碎片化了，生硬地把幾條故事主線搞成跌宕起伏，實屬沒必要。

來源: damihu 於 2023-09-03 22:32:28 [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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