好聯好律，但“卻惹鄉思南雁還”句，於題於意允當？平水落韻？新韻當注？因其先入為主，平水可略？略陳拙見，望諸位留情賜正。

來源: boredguy 於 2026-04-04 10:25:18 [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

WENXUECITY.COM does not represent or guarantee the truthfulness, accuracy, or reliability of any of communications posted by other users.