這翻譯好，保持了原詩的詩意盎然！第二句很優美。相比之下，我寫的就是大白話啊

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Even if my hair on the temples is as grey as frost, my heart is still as clear as the bright moon in front of this world。 

 

大白話版：願你出走半生，歸來仍是少年