四句都譯了

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四句全譯,押韻的不夠, 試用兩個雙關,chilling有cold和fun意思,sound有聲音和沉(睡)意思

懷君屬秋夜

散步詠涼天

空山鬆子落

幽人應未眠

having you in my mind at this autumn night
wandering off, chanting chilling moment  in my lyric
pine cones dropping toward the depth of the mountain

Alone there shall you be not falling in sound asleep