《道德經》寫得人人可誦？不過，用這個標準來看你的這首詩，倒也恰當。詩文應該格律挺好，讀來也朗朗上口，就是主題不明。

來源: 郭大平於 2023-05-16 11:07:38 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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