《江城子：仙凡交界燕來聲》

龍譜雙調蘇軾體 ＊
詞林正韻第十一部平聲

 

 

仙凡交界燕來聲，
繞江城，動天庭。
絕唱雲間，塵外一詩靈，
與我同飛何處去？
春竹畔，古蘭亭。

流觴曲水說浮生，
失崢嶸，得娉婷。
眼底神州，心底祝升平，
許我炎黃新一夢，
星雨夜，月鄉晴。


作者：紉秋蘭

＊
中平中仄仄平平。
仄平平，仄平平。
中仄平平，中仄仄平平。
中仄中平平仄仄，
平仄仄，仄平平。

中平中仄仄平平。
仄平平，仄平平。
中仄平平，中仄仄平平。
中仄中平平仄仄，
平仄仄，仄平平。

……

藍靈詩友英語小詩高掛共賞：

Being hit
With a rain shower,
The solar panels cry
Atop a city tower.


renqiulan (紉秋蘭)：

Lan Ling (Blue Soul) graced my post with the above catchy ditty, to which I responded with a light-hearted prose as follows:

In Solaria, the city planners had a brilliant idea. They decided to cover every rooftop with state-of-the-art solar panels to harness every last ray of sunshine. This was heralded as a groundbreaking step toward a greener future. However, in their excitement, they overlooked a crucial detail: Solaria wasn't exactly a sun city. Its residents had to brave the elements practically every single day. No wonder all the solar panels were crying in the rain.