或曰啟承轉合,或曰浪費,可否斟酌?
七絕不求對仗,有緣最好。此去林間漫步,有蝶伴行,夏意未盡,秋色已出,要是惹上一兩隻馬蜂,倉皇間滑入坡底水塘豈不壞了風景?
竊以為詩隨意遷,不必拘泥。有緣方家點評,不勝榮幸之至。
或曰啟承轉合,或曰浪費,可否斟酌?
七絕不求對仗,有緣最好。此去林間漫步,有蝶伴行,夏意未盡,秋色已出,要是惹上一兩隻馬蜂,倉皇間滑入坡底水塘豈不壞了風景?
竊以為詩隨意遷,不必拘泥。有緣方家點評,不勝榮幸之至。
• 不是賜教,作者貼出來,讀者評論一下,你 -ghertfort- ♀ (1230 bytes) () 09/03/2020 postreply 04:48:28
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