踏園-查秋 前兩句說一事,浪費。第二句前兩字建議換成另一物,對偶的,比如:遊蜂之類。如何?
踏園-查秋 前兩句說一事,浪費。第二句前兩字建議換成另一物,對偶的,比如:遊蜂之類。如何?
• 詩友肯賜教,總是有緣。說一事之論,可否明示? -老哈哈- ♂ (353 bytes) () 09/02/2020 postreply 19:44:23
• 不是賜教,作者貼出來,讀者評論一下,你 -ghertfort- ♀ (1230 bytes) () 09/03/2020 postreply 04:48:28
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