初稿堆砌了很多美麗的詞字在頭兩句來描寫晚霞,但整詩結構欠佳。重寫的這稿結構較流暢,但隻有最後一句寫晚霞。。。
初稿堆砌了很多美麗的詞字在頭兩句來描寫晚霞,但整詩結構欠佳。重寫的這稿結構較流暢,但隻有最後一句寫晚霞。。。
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