因有共鳴,冒昧建議如下:
“共赴”似不妥,改為“相慰”或其他;下闋前兩句“相去”改為“山水”,“莫道”用在此處不夠貼切,改為“夜夜”或其他。
見笑了。
因有共鳴,冒昧建議如下:
“共赴”似不妥,改為“相慰”或其他;下闋前兩句“相去”改為“山水”,“莫道”用在此處不夠貼切,改為“夜夜”或其他。
見笑了。
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