Good! I like it! 仿魯拜體試翻譯Wingreen詩人佳作：

牆角一樹紅，無意請秋風，
掃葉花園淨，下周好立冬。

A tree  with red leaves at the corner,

has no desire to be the autumn wind teaser.

The garden has to be cleaned

and get ready for the winter.

冒昧。。：） 問好！