讚。進步不少，有點感覺，除了一些遣詞和3/4句。寫詩就是費心力摳字眼。天賦和努力也很重要。

來源: coollie 於 2016-10-27 11:59:58 [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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