有朋來聚何來愁?
酒美詩好月光柔。
人生難得尋知己,
歡樂憂傷一盡收!
有朋來聚何來愁?
酒美詩好月光柔。
人生難得尋知己,
歡樂憂傷一盡收!
• 根據平仄修改,供參考。 -yuanxiang- ♂ (748 bytes) () 07/12/2016 postreply 11:32:04
• 漂亮!深謝沅湘君!!就喜歡這樣交流切磋!學習了! -荷花清香- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2016 postreply 11:52:45
• 對,就是交流切磋。 -yuanxiang- ♂ (92 bytes) () 07/12/2016 postreply 18:51:09
• 沅湘兄心細。謝謝! -荷花清香- ♀ (225 bytes) () 07/12/2016 postreply 20:03:26
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