【原擬】：望月吟風當煮酒(仄仄平平平仄仄),尋梅踏雪可逢【君】(平平仄仄仄平平)。然 "君" 為上平十二文韻，崩潰而改

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【原擬】：望月吟風當煮酒(仄仄平平平仄仄),尋梅踏雪可逢【君】(平平仄仄仄平平)。然 "君" 為 上平十二文韻，崩潰而改