慚愧！俺也隻是在用字的韻上作個排列組合罷了。其他的方方麵麵，如對仗、意境啥的都沒顧上。算不上合格的律詩！見笑了！

來源: 石蝶於 2015-04-09 15:57:08 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

WENXUECITY.COM does not represent or guarantee the truthfulness, accuracy, or reliability of any of communications posted by other users.