石兄豪爽好詞！不同凡響。兩點小建議。星轉鬥移改鬥轉星移於律更順些。攜萬裏征塵改萬裏攜（或踏）征塵，節奏更鏗鏘些。個見參考。

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石兄豪爽好詞！不同凡響。兩點小建議。星轉鬥移改鬥轉星移於律更順些。攜萬裏征塵 改 萬裏攜（或踏）征塵，節奏更鏗鏘些。個見參考。