有深度的好詩！！！隻覺一字似可再酌：背水村莊漸，這漸字語焉似不甚詳。如用：現，或遠，不知君意如何？

來源: 品羽題紅於 2014-10-14 15:12:52 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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