很有孟郊《遊子吟》的味道，字字都透出母愛、對母親思念之情，感人！頜、頸聯對仗似乎還須推敲。

來源: momo_sharon 於 2014-10-04 17:59:08 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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