今天下班前看到師兄的原稿，尾聯讓我捧腹不已！感覺其它聯改完比原稿好，但我更喜歡原稿的頸聯。

來源: 寒硯於 2014-10-02 16:18:16 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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