兩片折腰體仄韻小七絕。感覺下片可以蘊藉一些，至少第一個＂雲＂字可以不必用得那麽直白。謝謝。

來源: 墨瑞於 2014-07-11 15:36:17 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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