不感覺生硬，意境都在！隻是按您給的格律，好像有幾句出韻？

來源: 膠老爺於 2014-04-12 19:41:10 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

WENXUECITY.COM does not represent or guarantee the truthfulness, accuracy, or reliability of any of communications posted by other users.