八病不是針對律詩的句子。律詩合格、合律則已去掉很多病。林兄大概是想說我的詩是不合格律的......

來源: *東籬* 於 2014-02-26 07:23:35 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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