感覺“幽”與“盈”矛盾，轉句與結句有重疊，不若寫春天來臨比再寫花紅有意境。

來源: chunfengfeng 於 2014-02-15 11:18:44 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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