回複：第一段、第三段很好看^_^第二段，恩，有點另一個時空的感覺，斷了一下,個見。

It was an experimental poem between my brother and
me. He did not have to cooperate and I was corned by his 
1st sentence of the 2nd paragraph. But I do think it's a good challenge.  It's an old piece we
wrote around the time of Newtown massacre in NH in 2012---very sad at the time and deeply disappointed
afterwards. Thanks for your comments.