謝謝沅湘，改動之後看來比原先的好，原先匆匆寫下，古詩詞還是要潛心煉字為好。我打自己腦袋一下。

來源: ling1984 於 2013-05-02 15:13:50 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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