謝謝沅湘，這確實是我填古詞的大毛病，上闕總是比下闕好。剛剛改動了下闕，還請沅湘不吝過目指導。

來源: ling1984 於 2013-04-30 20:47:43 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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