看了照片和詩，心痛！詩前六句都好，就是“惜”的題意略欠一點。末句或許可改一下。順問好！

來源: 曲未平於 2013-04-29 12:22:52 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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