This little paragraph was written during supper while waiting for others to finish, as I was quick in eating and finished earlier. Instead of going away, I just took a piece of paper and wrote down what I wanted to say, while listening to others talking. Frankly, some points jumped out during writing and even I didn't mean to say that initially.
There are run-on sentences and unproper use of compound and complex sentenses, but who cares? I am not writing a thesis, I am not writing for a formal publication. I am not relying on the writing as a means of living. However, I forgot one point until I read your comments. I should be responsible for what I am writing as it is online publically and it would affect people. Thus my apology if it wasted your precious time reading it, and my appreciation for your comments on writing.
Re-reading it I can smell the Chinese tastes. The usage of words and expressions are far less native (another example), but the more one writes the better it will become. Maybe this is the next goal I should set for myself: to write well. Sorry hurting you unintentionally if it did and thanks for the comments.
