回複:let me try normal word order.
heaving breasts (高聳的胸,高聳的乳房)
a stir terrified,(驚嚇的吵鬧聲-意譯)
a huge flag "shen the duke"-大旗上寫著"shen the duke"(公爵shen,shen應該是姓,my guess)
"monkey the spook"(幽靈猴,haha, i don't know)
now waves broke on rocks like drums (海浪拍打著岩石象打鼓一樣)