你這老熊一頭,站俺小女子肩上,不把俺徹底踩埋到土裏了的說

來源: 2010-05-29 13:06:45 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀:

1)part好,到底是情詩大聖,


2)....had also wondered embroidering a pattern to cover it up.....

可以改成
I once thought to embroider a pattern to cover it up
俺沒改是因為覺的句子結構的問題更重要,提醒self同學一些語法問題。diction是另一方麵的問題~~