1)part好,到底是情詩大聖, 2)....had also wondered embroidering a pattern to cover it up..... 可以改成 I once thought to embroider a pattern to cover it up 俺沒改是因為覺的句子結構的問題更重要,提醒self同學一些語法問題。diction是另一方麵的問題~~