88 queen 來了,多謝指正。.
第一條,全盤接納。
第二條,改成 The first time we met Ben, he struck us favourably as a spirited young man who loves playing piano from the bottom of his heart.
第三條,你的順多了,就它了。
第四條,google了一下,好象還是please don't hesitant, 但我經常看到 don't be hesitant 這種用法,哪位大拿出來定奪一下?