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Given the short time, you did a wonderful job. For such a long article with so many big words and such complicated sentence structure, it will take me at least a week to straighten it out, then maybe another week to read it out aloud. I can never nail something like this over my lunch break. In fact, I can barely get my lunch done within an hour. :)

But since you are a respectful master, we are expecting more, much more from you. When a man is driven insane, he doesn't have to be fast-talking or murmuring. He would be moody. So you may need to pay some attention to the fluctuation in your tone to let listeners feel the intensity and desperation of that poor guy. Just my 1 cent.