Your writing is pretty good.

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once in a blue moon == rarely
feel obligated to do something.
all used very well.

Friendly reminder:
policeman /men/ with e upside down. not as man (the single word)

soon - sounds a little like 宋
moon - sounds a little like 夢

you need to pout for /u:/ sound + /n/ sound