【Poem Reading Tuesday】大家合寫英文歌:【Childhood Memory】童鞋們,六一快樂!

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It is so exciting that our talented friends of MYSJ have completed the original English lyrics of “Childhood Memory” within only 2 days! The lyrics have excellent rhyming, alliteration, etc poetry skills.  With the help of AI, the cool song “Childhood memory” is now released!:)

Happy International Children's Day to Everyone at MYSJ!

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Comments from 蟲蟲:

This piece is really nice! It has light-hearted fun memories 

 
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breezy afternoon, azure sky, fish nibbling feet, cicada's chorus, flower garden, and birds' singing paint a vivid picture of peaceful and sensory experience of childhood. 

There is a shift in sentiments in the second stanza. This change gives this piece a sensory depth and adds a philosophical layer to the poem, thanks to Yi Hua :)

 

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【Childhood Memory】

Lyrics written by: 暖冬cool夏(暖)

                            甜蟲蟲 (蟲)

                            移花接木(花)

                            最西邊的島上(島)

                            妖妖靈(妖)

Composition&Arrangement&Vocal:AI


 
[Verse]
 
In this breezy and brilliant afternoon (妖)
 
 
The sky is azure like jubilant June(暖)
 
 
Little fish nibble my feet in a small stream (蟲)
 
 
In the distance, cicadas stridently scream (蟲)
 
 
[Verse]
 
Ideals are set, ideas are given(花)
 
 
There is no Hell, there is no Heaven (花)
 
 
An endless field of flowering garden(島)
 
 
Butterflies flying and birds singing (島)

 
[Chorus]
 
Doctrines breed the obedient generation(花)
 
 
Carefree characters lead to creation (妖)as well as destruction(花)
 
 
That commences a reincarnation and redemption (蟲)
 
 
Little Red Riding Hood dancing to a new destination(島)

 

 


 

 

 


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