《行香子：京華麗人》A Beijing Beauty

是曉還昏，已冷猶焚；我和我，相遠相親。
香檳潑月，又濕衣裙；任一痕深，一痕淺，
一痕新。

也如春色，也似秋塵；我和我，相遇相分。
有花有夢，無果無根；任一生真，一生假，
一生人。

作者：紉秋蘭

Smiling she's not;
Looking cool, she's seen hot.
How's the Party? Can't care less.
What's out there? Just a mess.
Let no golden chance slip by.
Everyone's life is but a lie.
A Tesla she drives.
Alone she cries
And survives.

 

--- 藍靈

 

 

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• Hi, 藍靈!Thanks for the story.I know too little about Beijing. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 19:58:06

• Hi, renqiulan! Truth be told, I couldn't pull off this -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:02:56

• project without your contribution. Thank you! -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:05:25

• My pleasure. Have you ever run into a gold digger girl -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:10:05

• by any chance? I'm just curious. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:12:05

• You bet. What struck me the most was her cynical outlook -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:18:57

• on life. Cynicism was and still is the order of the day. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:24:26

• I wasn't there but I could feel it when reading your poem. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:28:25

• Somehow the gold digger in my poem reminds me of Zola's Nana -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:51:20

• Zola put Nana front and center of the tragic -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:53:14

• ending days of Napoleon III's empire. Your thoughts? -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:56:44

• O dear! I wasn't a literature major. That said, I happen to -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:02:57

• have read Nana. I think Zola didn’t do much justice to his -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:06:04

• protagonist. Yes, Nana's "profession" wasn't exactly -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:09:05

• enviable. But then Nana had to make a living when eking out -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:11:41

• an existence was anything but easy. Zola might want to paint -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:14:38

• a French equivalent of the Byzantine empire in its twilight. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:18:50

• Zola was moralistic to a fault, which is why Nana the novel -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:30:12

• is so faulty. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:30:59

• Thank you, renqiulan, for your thoughts! -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 18:45:11

• 任一痕深，一痕淺， 一痕新。任一生真，一生假， 一生人。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:21:54

• A Tesla she drives. -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:22:18

• 從古詩詞到英文Tesla ，俱佳，瞬間有穿越古今中外之感。：） -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:23:32

• 同感，謝謝藍靈和秋蘭分享！Have a great weekend! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:38:59

• 謝謝小西，周末愉快！ -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:44:28

• Thank you, 小西! You have a great weekend too! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:46:38

• 周末愉快，小西，藍靈，秋蘭！ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:45:37

• 盈盈周六快樂！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:32:59

• 紉詞中有“香檳潑月”句，我覺得富現代感，很能點出麗人心境。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:40:53

• “香檳潑月”句，富現代感，很能點出麗人心境。+100086! -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:47:57

• 謝謝盈盈！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:43:01

• Thank you, 盈盈! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:43:14

• 感謝盈盈鼓勵！ -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:18:49

• 謝謝你們二位的精彩帖子！：） -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:48:42

• My pleasure, 盈盈！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:32:05

• 藍靈是拙作的靈感泉源。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:34:14

• I respectfully disagree. Haha! -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 18:46:25

• It's a cute idea, isn't it? -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:30:48

• 紉秋蘭寫的，我很喜歡。學填詞，有意思極了。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:32:16

• I'm a greenhorn when it comes to poetry writing. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:52:56

• No, you are not. Actually you've humbled me. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:55:21

• I don't think so. Well, goodnight, 藍靈 ! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:58:10

• Love it too! 任一痕深，一痕淺， 一痕新!!! -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 23:00:22

• Me too. Hi, 暖冬！ -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:22:02

• Me three. Hi, 暖冬和藍靈！：）） -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:49:22

• Thank you all! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:35:55

• “行香子”的特有格式，在下喜愛。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:44:53

• Good night! Say hi to your wife for me. She's awesome! -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 21:05:22

• My wife is thrilled. Keep writing. Keep rhyming. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 21:09:24

• Wow, Qiu's poem is classic and has musicality of language! -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 22:59:02

• Same here. He's the only sinologist I have ever come across. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:26:14

• I think renqiulan is a natural born poet in every Chinese -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:28:29

• sense of the word. He would beg to differ, though. Haha. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:30:46

• 藍靈, I beg to differ. I'm a big fan of Chinese poetry though. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 15:46:30

• musicality of language, your comment is spot on! :) -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:47:07

• 秋蘭和藍靈，一古一今，兩人都好有才氣！藍靈怎麽會想到Tesla的：）欣賞了！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 23:04:35

• 感謝暖冬鼓勵！ -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:31:41

• 感謝暖冬鼓勵！拙詞靈感來自藍靈。我塗鴉，她不棄。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:14:23

• +100086！不能同意更多啦。：）） -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:49:51

• +100086 too! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:41:13

• 中文詞英文詩俱佳。京華一般泛指京城，不一定指北京吧，比如冠蓋滿京華，斯人獨憔悴，杜甫指的是當時的京城長安 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 07:51:29

• 感謝godog對“京華”的闡釋。隻想說，紉秋蘭“行香子”小令寫的是京華；我的自由體英詩寫的是北京，拙作並非中詞英譯。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 08:26:18

• 藍靈，you have a style---short, sharp and shapely. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:08:06

• Thanks for the first syllable rhyme of yours---short, sharp -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 18:51:31

• and shapely. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 18:53:01

• 感謝godog鼓勵！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 10:57:45