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黃河遠上白雲間,>The Yellow River runs up in the cloudy sky,
一片孤城萬仞山。> By a lonely town in the mountains high,
羌笛何須怨楊柳,> Departure flute song complains in vain,
春風不度玉門關。> No pass Yumen Fort is the spring wind.