匿名美玉去了旅館，出不來了，寫的真好。我就繼續這個話題說說，個人最為欣賞的頂級的歌詞，詩歌。

旅館一遊，沒想到引出美玉。“We are programmed to receive. You can check out any time you like. But you can never leave.”參透欲望之上的美國夢。

我呢，則在美女偈語的那句找到心魔的影子。原來我們都是自己的囚徒。

一首上乘的隱喻性歌詞，有這種能力，讓每一個聽眾，隻要你願意多想一層，就可以找到

破綻！

為什麽每人找到的破綻都不一樣呢？因為

這不是歌詞的破綻，這是你自己的破綻！

極品歌詞，很多是直抒心意的。但是我更欣賞那些極富多重隱喻的歌詞。因為，從小到大聽加州旅館，一路走來，每次聽，都又不同的共鳴，我的破綻在偉大的作品麵前，逐一顯現。讓我驚詫，反省，進而明悟。

沒有破綻的歌詞，可以很好，可以開門見山，卻缺少了跟隨我們一路前行的能力。

最後在給大家上一首我認為頂級的歌詞，有興趣的，跟我一起看看除了官方宣傳的含義之外的破綻！

U2

One

Is it getting better?
Or do you feel the same?
Will it make it easier on you now?
You got someone to blame

You say, one love, one life
When it's one need in the night
One love, we get to share it
Leaves you baby if you don't care for it

Did I disappoint you?
Or leave a bad taste in your mouth?
You act like you never had love
And you want me to go without

Well it's too late tonight
To drag the past out into the light
We're one but we're not the same
We get to carry each other, carry each other
One!

Have you come here for forgiveness?
Have you come to raise the dead?
Have you come here to play Jesus?
To the lepers in your head

Did I ask too much? More than a lot
You gave me nothin' now it's all I got
We're one but we're not the same
Well we hurt each other then we do it again

You say love is a temple, love a higher law
Love is a temple, love the higher law
You ask me to enter but then you make me crawl
And I can't be holdin' on to what you got
When all you got is hurt

One love, one blood
One life, you got to do what you should
One life, with each other
Sisters, brothers

One life but we're not the same
We get to carry each other, carry each other
One
One

 

這首歌詞裏，我的破綻是，我無法再平靜地旁觀美國分裂分裂再分裂了。We get to carry each other, carry each other。

為什麽到處是相互的責難，卻沒有片刻的理解。

為什麽到處是仇恨，卻沒有哪怕一絲的能力找到根源？

美國！

 

U2 ONE 這首詞裏。你的破綻在那裏？