Your brave attempt has deservedly drawn accolades...

from your readers including yours truly.  But if you are not too busy basking in positive feedback, you might want to make sure that you have abided by all the grammatical rules applicable to your work. Su Dongpo could afford to fly high. His translators, however, have no such luxury. They have to be on firm footing, which means that they better take one small step at a time. Beware of quicksand.

I don't mean to spoil the fun. One might find a ton of fun in great technical mastery and meticulous execution, too. I better stop here. Thanks!