詞填的不錯。鴻鵠是swan吧，geese低檔點了吧，另plum指果實，是不是要用mume？:)

來源: dandelion1 於 2014-09-04 13:13:07 [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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