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曉鏡但愁雲鬢改，  
夜吟應覺月光寒。  
蓬山此去無多路，  
青鳥殷勤為探看。 

By the mirror at dawn
She worries her hair losing its bloom
Chanting poems at late night
Surely he finds it sad in the moon light
There's barely a path towards Mount Penglai 
Would the blue bird be there and sight