樓主對海老師的總體評價極為中肯。

比如這一句：
“東風不與周郎便﹐銅雀春深鎖二喬。
If the east wind didn’t do young Zhou a favor,
Both Qiao girls’d be locked in Brass-Sparrow Terrace in deep spring.”
從詩人描述的曆史事實看，這兩句英文應為過去虛擬語氣，應為hadn't done....would have been locked，而不是didn't...would be。